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Fringe 2006 Reviews (63)

Friday Girls
Written and Directed by Frank Hotchkiss
Playaway Productions
Augustines
**(*)

During the last weeks of school, five girls embark on a series of bedroom meetings to better acquaint themselves with each other and to discuss the events of their lives.

As the weeks pass they learn more and more about one another and discover that outward appearances are usually deceptive.

From the outset, Friday Girls threatens to be a simplistic affair; the five leads are stereotypical of any story based around schoolgirls. The popular leader, shy academic, outsider and the ne'er-do-well are all present and correct. The problems faced by each, including their secrets, are clumsily sign-posted to the audience, with each revelation to the other characters as predictable as the last. That is not to say there is no merit in the story, it's told well enough, simply that it is over-familiar.

The five leads present themselves to a higher standard than the plot, all of whom were relaxed and naturalistic in their roles, each being entirely believable as their character and taking pains to ensure that each managed to be unique without hogging the limelight.

However, in a production which sported its own technical crew, the time taken on scene changes was unforgivable; and can be attributed to the use of extraneous and largely unnecessary props which served no real purpose other than aesthetic.

That said, the play's resolution is surprisingly affecting and made a touching us of Jocelyn Dick's fine singing voice, contrasting with the action elsewhere on stage. More such moments of genuine emotion and fewer attempts at covering issues would have made this production a far more entertaining piece to watch.

Graeme Strachan

Girl in Box
Futurememory
Devised by Company
C Central
***

Featuring a pair of incestuous lovers, a razzmatazz stripper and a body building sex-slave, Girl in Box could hardly be called run-of-the-mill. In addition, while the staging of the props, a large box structure surrounded by shower curtains, the plot is far less simple to define.

Richard Jackson and Natasha James play Alan and Nina, a brother and sister who live in a small fishing village and exist in a bizarre relationship, which has served them since their childhood. Alan is highly unstable and completely emotionally dependent on Nina, who is maternal and protective towards him. But when Matt arrives in the town from overseas both siblings are drawn towards him and further from each other.

The actors hold a good chemistry with each other and remain believable and focussed through the range of emotions on display. The highly charged scenes of abusive life and violence contrast well with the quieter moments and the looks back into their childhood.

Bizarrely the inclusion of the razzmatazz stripper Clown manages to be the highlight of events. Emma Bailey excels in the role, cavorting around, being crude and occasionally menacing without ever really justifying her pertinence to the rest of the production.

Much as the concept of the play is interesting, the though provoking moments are not enough to justify the long running and at times nonsensical story line.

Graeme Strachan

Lord of the Flies
Feltonfleet @ the Fringe
Directed by Alasdair Richardson
Augustines
****(*)

Featuring a cast of genuine schoolboys, this is a shining example of the peaks to which Youth theatre can rise, as they provide not only moving and genuine emotion but also real conviction with a lengthy and complicated script.

Whilst practically every school child has been led through this story at the hands of teachers everywhere, the adaptation has been simplified by following the book's logical narrative, omitting the colourful and unnecessary hillside treks and boyish concerns and concentrating on the underlying themes. Feltonfleet's version manages to eradicate the dull and dutiful aspects of the story, which bog down the pace and are overtly preaching. The main body of the story is still there, however effective embellishments have been made. There are suitable changes in most of the climactic scenes, leading to a feeling of sobering horror at the two deaths, with Piggy's unwarranted murder placed so far from the possible accident of the book as to be genuinely tragic.

Graeme Strachan

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