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Fringe 2008 Reviews (105)

Mort
Paradox Productions
C
***

Stephen Brigg's adaptation of Pratchett's seminal comedy about Death taking an apprentice is brought to the stage with a decent amount of passion, and some technical wizardry, not least of all to bring a seven-foot tall glowing-eyed grim reaper convincingly to stage with a booming all surrounding voice and still enough savvy to improvise when necessary.

Following the story of the novel more or less exactly, the jolly tale moves with a speed and pepper that outstrip the development of the characters onstage. The acting is capable considering the flippant material but sadly, while the jokes land home with a good measure of comic timing, much of the plotting and scene changing come across as clunky and ham-fisted. Much of this comes from the script's condensing of the novel into such a short period, but the effect is still a thin storyline that feels slightly awkward. Another problem with this is the staging of a climactic sword-fight between Mort and Death which doesn't come off very well and subsequently the ending feels underwritten.

All in all, a decent production of what is still a problematic production for any company without the resources to properly devote the necessary expense and time to the staging.

Graeme Strachan

Don't Say a Word
Sole Purpose Productions
Quaker Meeting House
**(*)

It's difficult to portray spousal abuse onstage, as the issue is powerful enough to swamp the production with emotion and supersede the story with manipulation. Thankfully in this case the subject is broached without any blatant emotional manipulation. Patricia Byrne tells us the story of Pauline and Paul, and the relationship which builds from the first few meetings through to marriage and then into a downward spiral of abuse and victimisation. The result is almost a textbook depiction of a controlling relationship, as the constraints and limitations placed on Pauline by her controlling husband move from the menial to the ridiculous before he begins being physically violent towards her.

Performing this one woman show with some skill, Patricia Byrne manages to convey both the terror and the overwrought pain inherent to the situation quite well. However there is a stilted quality to her delivery that divorces her from the immediacy of the emotions, with every word over-annunciated and clinical. The contrast is that her segments as Paul, showing the counter opinion are far more naturalistic, as she adopts a deeper timber of voice and mannerisms befitting a middle-aged man. This only goes to underline the disparities in the writing between the two characters as Paul is little more than a cardboard cut-out with the most sterotypical motivations and background. The result is that for all of the power and depth given to Pauline's story, it seems almost by the numbers, straight from the pages of a glossy magazine's exploitative tale of abuse. This is a shame considering the importance of bringing such a subject to light, but in this case it feels like case of preaching to the converted.

Graeme Strachan

Lost Soul Music
White Rose Theatre for Belt Up
C Central
****

In the lazy and debauched surrounding of C venue's Red Room, more like an Opium den than a venue, complete with the odd chaise longue and cushions aplenty, the audience are encouraged to recline and enjoy the occasionally absurd and terribly enjoyable fun during one of six alternating shows on the theme of losing one's soul. On the night I happened by, it was a story about a kind and deliberate young woman, haunted by two manifestations of her own worry in the form of shabbily dressed Morris and Maude. They lambasted her goodly ways and the pain that had been caused by her honesty and thoughtfulness. With snappy jazz numbers and toe-tapping songs tied in throughout, it's a jolly ripping hour of fun and laughs as the skilled cast wind up a mirthful burlesque. Plenty of fun, and with the chance of six different shows to see, all the more reason to pop in.

Graeme Strachan

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