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I Was a Beautiful Day
By Iain F. MacLeod
Traverse Theatre Company/An Lanntair, Stornoway
Traverse Theatre, Edinburgh
Review by Graham Strachan (2005)
Cartography, the study of mapping, is hardly the most exciting of pastimes.
Its dependency on to the physical structures and the contours of a landscape
mean that by its very nature it must be dry, precise and often dull.
As such it is nothing like Iain F. MacLeod's play.
I Was A Beautiful Day revolves around an ex-Gulf War soldier;
Dan (played by Iain MacRae), a voluntary inmate in a mainland Scottish
mental institution. Dan spends his time dreaming of his native Hebridean
Island, drawing maps and writing down the stories that make up its history.
Today however, he has visitors: fellow patient Lube (John Kazek), who
has recently been downgraded from maximum security, and Ann, professional
Cartographer tasked with mapping Dan's home island. Each needs him for
their own reasons: Lube, for companionship and an ally in his surreal
escape plans, and Ann to give a unique focus to her work. Grudgingly
their presences are accepted, and become necessary to Dan as he is made
to consider his own isolation and the possibility of returning home.
The play's greatest asset is undoubtedly the skill with which the dialogue
has been fashioned into an almost anarchical weaving of observations
and retorts. The interplay between Dan and Lube has a lyrical quality,
served well by MacLeod's peppering of Gaelic and old Scots and the cumbersome
subversions of unusual English turns of phrase.
This allows both actors to shine in different ways: MacRae is ramrod
straight and cuttingly to the point at all times, his poise and energy
at all times leaving no doubt about his military past and yet still
showing that there is something else hidden beneath.
Kazek on the other hand is a revelation of ever-changing movement and
action. He is by turns manic and docile, displaying a childlike mindset
but with the rough vigour and bitter cynicism of a downtrodden middle-aged
businessman.
There were few let-downs in the piece but one was the slightly stilted
performance of Lesley Hart's Ann, who seemed a little uncomfortable
with the dialogue, which in turn made more obvious how underwritten
her character is in comparison to the other protagonists. This unevenness
in the scripting of the characters left much of her dialogue, particularly
the women in a man's world comments, feeling shoehorned in.
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